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there is a voice inside of you that whispers all day long i feel that this is right for me i know that this is wrong no teacher preacher parent friend or wise man can decide what's right for you - just listen to the voice that speaks inside - shel silverstein mandy. late 30s. she/her. dan and phil, mcyt, scream/horror, scifi, random shit i love. I am an adult. If you are under 18, please do not follow or interact. I write and reblog explicit fic. You are welcome to block me to ensure my content does not show up on your feed! Don't be a dick. :)

Me at 13: “god I can’t wait to go home and read fanfic”

Me at 17: “god I can’t wait to go home and read fanfic”

Me at 21: “god I can’t wait to go home and read fanfic”

Me at 41: "god I can't wait to go home and read fanfic"

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Here is a reminder, in case you needed it (as I did yesterday) that you can BREAK YOUR STREAKS

  • you can just stop
  • there is no moral value or judgement in having a streak or not
  • companies are banking on your streak count keeping you coming to their app and being a committed user - this benefits them and their advertisers and not you
  • instead you can make active choices today or any day you want to do things that bring you joy or are helpful
  • a habit is still a habit if you manage it even like 75% of the time (or 50% of the time or whatever it is, maybe your habit doesn't actually need to be one that requires you to do it every day)

This brought to you by me trying to reduce my phone screen time to stuff I actually want to be doing and not just cycling through the same apps every day, and the surprising revelation that keeping up a streak might not be good for me, actually.

recently my friend's comics professor told her that it's acceptable to use gen AI for script-writing but not for art, since a machine can't generate meaningful artistic work. meanwhile, my sister's screenwriting professor said that they can use gen AI for concept art and visualization, but that it won't be able to generate a script that's any good. and at my job, it seems like each department says that AI can be useful in every field except the one that they know best.

It's only ever the jobs we're unfamiliar with that we assume can be replaced with automation. The more attuned we are with certain processes, crafts, and occupations, the more we realize that gen AI will never be able to provide a suitable replacement. The case for its existence relies on our ignorance of the work and skill required to do everything we don't.

Tiny Ways to Make Characters Feel Real Without Info-Dumping

We don’t need a five-paragraph backstory. We need texture.

1. Hint at depth — don’t prove it. Instead of telling us she had a rough childhood: “Her sleeve slid up, revealing the tattoo she never explained.”

2. Give them contradictions. People aren’t neat. A pacifist who snaps. A leader who overchecks his reflection. A cynic who keeps a lucky charm.

3. Let side characters breathe. Give even the one-scene shopkeeper a quirk: “The baker spoke in a whisper like every word cost him coin.”

4. Make habits matter. Not “He was nervous,” but: “He thumbed the frayed seam of his pocket again, again, again.”

5. Tie perception to personality. Someone anxious doesn’t see a forest; they see shadows between trees. Someone nostalgic sees the same forest but softer, full of memory.

How to Describe Without Pausing the Story Dead

Description is strongest when it’s moving.

1. Anchor description in action. Instead of: “The tavern was dim and crowded.” (pause) Try: “She shoulder-checked through the dim tavern, lanternlight slanting across sweat and spilled ale.”

2. Only describe what your character notices. A thief notices exits. A poet notices colours. A soldier notices threats.

3. Mood colours setting. Waiting for bad news? “The sun felt sharp, too bright, like it was watching.”

4. Don’t aim for a full picture — aim for the right details. “A single bootprint in the ash.” Tells a whole story.

Subtle Writing Techniques To Help Make Your Writing Pop

Just little tweaks that level your writing.

1. Use natural actions to foreshadow. Not: “Little did she know the knife would be important later.” But: “Her gaze snagged on the drawer — then she looked away.”

2. Use symbolism instead of clichés. If you hate the metaphor “time was running out”: Plant broken clocks. Or a street performer counting down songs.

3. Trust ambiguity. Real life rarely explains itself. Let readers make theories.

4. Repeat themes in different places. If the story’s about trust, show it in: • a broken promise • a character avoiding eye contact • a shaky hand passing a key

5. Change sentence rhythm to match the scene. Fight scene? Short, sharp lines. Grief scene? Slow, heavy, lingering.

I’m sorry if you have answered this before, I just discovered your incredibly writing. Is there a sequel to your fic ‘home for Christmas?.’ It ended on a bit of a cliffhanger.

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oop i'm so bad at answering asks promptly.

there's no sequel :( i had plans to write one for ages but it just never really gelled. that fic is actually one of the ones i struggled with most.

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