I need help, my fellow fanfiction writters
I initially made Evan and pandora not twins because of plotholes, but I finally thought of a way to make it work that is actually cooler than the OG plot. The problem is that there's already seven chapters of the fic already and like +40k words and idk if should change it or it will feel too sudden. I only need to change like, two scenes, but still.
Summaries of every fic below
"A horrocrux is a truly horrible thing." Dumbledore says, voice ever so slightly threatening. "And you, my boy, are going to tell me where the Dark lord is keeping the rest."
"The rest?" Regulus gasps. Because- no. There weren't supposed to be more. Regulus was going to destroy it, and then the war would end. He was supposed to stop this.
"Yes, Regulus. The rest." Albus repeats, all previous politeness gone
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Where Kreature goes to Dumbledore for help to save Regulus, and the headmaster of Hogwarts has nothing to stop him from getting what he wants.
Except, perhaps, an incredibly stubborn Sirius Black.
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"Do you want to race?"
Regulus looks at him with a mix of surprise, excitement and determination. "Oh, it's on."
It's not until later, after Regulus has already gone, that James will remember Regulus holding up the golden object with a smile so full of happiness that the whole world would be jealous if they saw, the moon reflecting in his bright, gray eyes.
And he'll realize, with a mix of fear and some giggly, fluffy thing, that oh.
James wants to kiss him. He wants to kiss that smile.
